Sunday, January 16, 2011

baby VS adult

Baby
Baby

small, cute
cuddling, crawling, teething
giggling, spitting--faxing, telephoning
working, fully grown, laughing
large, mature
Adult.

This is my second poem. I could make mistakes but... you know that. This is another poem about adult and baby. This poem also has many difference between two subjects. I described my childhood when I was baby, and I put my future's appearance. Of course I'll be more handsome than this. 
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9 comments:

  1. Chocolate lover!(Emily)January 16, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    You will not be handsome than that and I don't think that is your future appearance anyways..
    I will believe that you are joking, and even though you are joking..It is not funny. It makes me angry. Please! Make sense.

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  2. Mr. GarriochJanuary 16, 2011 at 6:59 PM

    Haha I really like this one. Funny! And I wonder why Emily is angry at you. Maybe she thinks you will be even more handsome?

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  3. Chocolate lover!(Emily)January 17, 2011 at 4:25 PM

    nono~never^ ^;
    If you say that, I will erase my comment,,maybe;;;

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  4. happymyloveJanuary 17, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    ha~~~ you will not never~~~~~ be hansome!!!!!!!! like him...Never in the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. This is my blogJanuary 17, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    He could be.
    He just need a plastic surgery.
    Or maybe he could somehow be naturally
    changed

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    Wow!
    I can't believe it I agree with Emily!
    Anyway it was fun I enjoyed your blog~

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  7. SoniaJanuary 17, 2011 at 9:52 PM

    I absolutely AGREE with Emily!!!
    Being proud of your self is good, I agree, but, too much is very very annoying!!! Also stop saying that you are handsome like Hyun Bin or Hyun Bin is not handsome or you are better than Hyun Bin because you are wrong!! Absolutely wrong!!!!!!! :(

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  8. star pro gamerJanuary 18, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    Every body(except Mr. Garrioch) be quiet

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  9. SoniaJanuary 18, 2011 at 10:25 PM

    I think all the mean commets will stop if yu chage one thing... I don't care what you say if you chage 현빈 picture in to 박휘순 picture...hehehehehehahahahaha

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